Ranelle

welcome to Ranelle's wiki page

Really enjoys playing netball Animal lover Nice Enjoys eating chips Loves sour lollies Laughs lots Enjoys the company of her great friends

//I'm glad to see you have made a start on your page Ranelle. I look forward to seeing what else you do :) Miss Paterson // My mum was in the bathroom applying makeup onto her face.I could see her lips change from pale to a nice princess pink.My dad was in the bedroom and as I walked in I got a whiff of his strong men's colonge.I heard a knock on the door it was the baby sitter they both said hello the baby sitter sat down and mum went back to the bathroom.The time ticked by it was my bedtime mum and dad tucked me in and gave me a BIG hug they said good night and walked out the door to their party.   ﻿ I was about four and my brother was eleven years old at the time.They rushed out the door.My brother Bryce came up the wooden stairs into the room across from mine he shut the curtains and flicked the light on said goodnight and walked back down the stairs. Bryce,the Baby sitter and me were fast asleep and something frighting was happening in the room across from mine.

The light had pulled out of the wall and was hanging there by some election cords. The wall started to heat up and soon the whole wall had caught on fire.It traveled to the curtain and it also caught on fire. The smoke alarms went off and Bryce and the baby sitter suddenly awoke from the loud noise Bryce told the baby sitter to run next door and call 111,

Bryce ran towards the flamed room got me out of the house i was still asleep we were all outside and the fire department came. The fire was put out but we lost most of our possessions. Mum and dad were called as they arrived mum thought she had lost me and Bryce but luckily she hadn't. I remember walking up black charcoal stairs with dad.

mum and dad were heart broken.

i didn't really under stand what was going on but as i got older i now understand alot more.

21/09/10  Is there any thing in my story that i might need to improve on:)?  21/09 Please sort it into paragraphs and then I will have another look at it. Miss Paterson :) yaaaay i have finished my story!:D 19/10/10 16/08/10 I'm so excited about this bit of writing Ranelle because you have shown me that you are really thinking about your work after our discussion today at our writing session. I think when you go back through this again you will see even more ways you "show me" what was happening. I look forward to seeing this evolve. Miss Paterson :)

There is a rat in a hat said pat under the mat and it has a bat!!!

it just came to my mind....... 