Zac

hello everyone out in the hole world
zac need fix a green word from briahn ,

snowboarding you slip you slide mostly you will glide have you tried snowboarding     SPACE EXPEDITION

 On a small farm just out of New Jersey lived a man by the name of Jimbo. He has one talent that he may be famous for one day.

 Jimbo is on a mission to be sent to outer space – if you are wondering what that talent is – he is an amazing archaeologist. He studies rocks from other palnts. Jimbo has been getting lots of calls from Nasa, Area 51 and the President of the United States. He soon realised that all these services wanted him because of the strange cases of stars disappearing straight from the night sky.

 Many people are wondering if this is the work of the extra terrestrial. Jimbo is preparing for his trip to the home of our home – the Universe. Jimbo is going with two other people. Alex Tait – the really grumpy one, but knows a lot about the Milky Way. And Michael Dycfeild, who has studied the extra terrestrial and completed many top secret missions.

 These three people are going to study – “Why the Stars are disappearing straight from the night sky” The crew is in the Apollo spaceship strapped down and ready for the command.

 5  4  3  2  1  BLAST-OFF

 Apollo Mission come in – Apollo Mission come in???? Hear you loud and clear Sergeant Liam. We are now leaving the worlds atmosphere. We are now entering space. We have dropped the rocket from the side of

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 Apollo spaceship, and we are now going through the non-ending dark nightmare of the universe.

 Jimbo and his team have flown past – something not known to man “WHAT is that” asks Alex Tait.  Jimbo explains -It is some sort of black hole, that sucks other planets in.

 Sergeant Liam come in. <span style="display: block; margin-bottom: 0pt; margin-left: 0cm; margin-right: 0cm; margin-top: 0cm; text-align: justify;"> “Yes Jimbo”

<span style="display: block; margin-bottom: 0pt; margin-left: 0cm; margin-right: 0cm; margin-top: 0cm; text-align: justify;"> We seem to be getting sucked into a black hole and it has already devoured Mars and the Moon and we do not know how many other planets. We are worried we do not know where it goes to. <span style="display: block; margin-bottom: 0pt; margin-left: 0cm; margin-right: 0cm; margin-top: 0cm; text-align: justify;"> Ahhhh <span style="display: block; margin-bottom: 0pt; margin-left: 0cm; margin-right: 0cm; margin-top: 0cm; text-align: justify;"> Alex – we have all communication with Sergeant Liam. <span style="display: block; margin-bottom: 0pt; margin-left: 0cm; margin-right: 0cm; margin-top: 0cm; text-align: justify;"> Where are we says Michael??? <span style="display: block; margin-bottom: 0pt; margin-left: 0cm; margin-right: 0cm; margin-top: 0cm; text-align: justify;"> We are in some other dimension says Jimbo. <span style="display: block; margin-bottom: 0pt; margin-left: 0cm; margin-right: 0cm; margin-top: 0cm; text-align: justify;"> GOSH – whats that says Michael. <span style="display: block; margin-bottom: 0pt; margin-left: 0cm; margin-right: 0cm; margin-top: 0cm; text-align: justify;"> Its an Alien – they have their own town – WOW <span style="display: block; margin-bottom: 0pt; margin-left: 0cm; margin-right: 0cm; margin-top: 0cm; text-align: justify;"> BOOF ….. BANG …… CRACK <span style="display: block; margin-bottom: 0pt; margin-left: 0cm; margin-right: 0cm; margin-top: 0cm; text-align: justify;"> Jimbo, Jimbo that spaceship has just blown up and we are now plummeting to the ground – Did you pack the parachutes – Alex.

<span style="display: block; margin-bottom: 0pt; margin-left: 0cm; margin-right: 0cm; margin-top: 0cm; text-align: justify;"> Bugggg **##?? I forgot!!!!**

<span style="display: block; margin-bottom: 0pt; margin-left: 0cm; margin-right: 0cm; margin-top: 0cm; text-align: justify;"> HELP – what are they dong to us?

<span style="display: block; margin-bottom: 0pt; margin-left: 0cm; margin-right: 0cm; margin-top: 0cm; text-align: justify;"> They are taking us to kill us – don’t let them take you says Jimbo.

<span style="display: block; margin-bottom: 0pt; margin-left: 0cm; margin-right: 0cm; margin-top: 0cm; text-align: justify;"> We can’t all our legs are numb.

<span style="display: block; margin-bottom: 0pt; margin-left: 0cm; margin-right: 0cm; margin-top: 0cm; text-align: justify;"> CLICK ….. CLANK …… is everyone OK???

<span style="display: block; margin-bottom: 0pt; margin-left: 0cm; margin-right: 0cm; margin-top: 0cm; text-align: justify;"> What are those cuffs made from? They are not cuffs they are unicorn restraints.

<span style="display: block; margin-bottom: 0pt; margin-left: 0cm; margin-right: 0cm; margin-top: 0cm; text-align: justify;"> Nothing can cut them.

<span style="display: block; margin-bottom: 0pt; margin-left: 0cm; margin-right: 0cm; margin-top: 0cm; text-align: justify;"> “Nothing but a hog laser.” Replies from the darkness.

<span style="display: block; margin-bottom: 0pt; margin-left: 0cm; margin-right: 0cm; margin-top: 0cm; text-align: justify;"> Whos that ? Its Troul. I am the slave is horribly treated by the aliens. Do you have a hog laser asked Jimbo?

<span style="display: block; margin-bottom: 0pt; margin-left: 0cm; margin-right: 0cm; margin-top: 0cm; text-align: justify;"> YES replied Troul – well then cut us down.

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<span style="display: block; margin-bottom: 0pt; margin-left: 0cm; margin-right: 0cm; margin-top: 0cm; text-align: justify;"> As they fled from the dungeon – they found a phone type thing. They tried to call earth. But all they heard was their king planning a plot to blow up earth. They found a UFO. Jimbo realised it was similar to the spaceships we fly. So they flew off and they got out of the non-ending universe and the aliens planet.

<span style="display: block; margin-bottom: 0pt; margin-left: 0cm; margin-right: 0cm; margin-top: 0cm; text-align: justify;"> But to find out that earth no longer existed – it had disappeared into oblivion.

<span style="display: block; margin-bottom: 0pt; margin-left: 0cm; margin-right: 0cm; margin-top: 0cm; text-align: justify;"> The extra terrestrial had destroyed our home, so what happened to Jimbo and their crew????

<span style="display: block; margin-bottom: 0pt; margin-left: 0cm; margin-right: 0cm; margin-top: 0cm; text-align: justify;"> No one knows and there is only so many planets in the universe and our planet is not one of them.

<span style="display: block; margin-bottom: 0pt; margin-left: 0cm; margin-right: 0cm; margin-top: 0cm; text-align: center;"><span style="color: #339966; display: block; font-family: 'Times New Roman'; font-size: 14pt; text-align: center;">Written by

<span style="display: block; margin-bottom: 0pt; margin-left: 0cm; margin-right: 0cm; margin-top: 0cm; text-align: center;"> __ ZACHARY __ //<span style="color: #ff0000; font-family: 'Palatino Linotype','Book Antiqua',Palatino,serif; font-size: 14pt; margin: 0cm 0cm 0pt;">22/08/10 Hi Zac, I have removed your last name. Remember our internet safety rules. Go back to our blog site if you want to have a look at them. This is a good start. I would like you to go back through it, one paragraph at a time and think about how you can add more detail to get your readers to be more engaged with the story. I hope you are having a good weekend. Miss Paterson //

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= grass is green but they dont understand the couler green =

= or blue they can't see so how would they know. ={ **=

sorry all have not been at school had too get heeps of my blood taken

<span style="background-color: #ffffff; color: #ff0000; display: block; font-family: 'Palatino Linotype','Book Antiqua',Palatino,serif; font-size: 170%;">Hope you are ok Zac. Good to see you have started on your Wiki. Take care. Miss Paterson :)

<span style="color: #9506e0; display: block; font-family: 'Lucida Sans Unicode','Lucida Grande',sans-serif; font-size: 160%; text-align: justify; vertical-align: super;">when your gone where will you go will you go up top or down below. <span style="color: #9506e0; display: block; font-family: 'Lucida Sans Unicode','Lucida Grande',sans-serif; font-size: 160%; text-align: justify; vertical-align: super;">will you sit in a coffin untill you are no skin, all bone or will your organs live on in other people close to you. you may do many things but the best ones are good ones.

<span style="color: #ff0037; display: block; font-family: 'Courier New',Courier,monospace;">This is quite powerful. Made me think. Do you think you could organise the way it is set out? Putting some statements on separate lines? Just a thought. Can you please do two things for me in the future?

<span style="color: #ff0037; display: block; font-family: 'Courier New',Courier,monospace;">1. Date your work

<span style="color: #ff0037; display: block; font-family: 'Courier New',Courier,monospace;">2. Put your new work at the top so your readers see it straight away and have to scroll down to see your older work.

<span style="color: #ff0037; display: block; font-family: 'Courier New',Courier,monospace;">thanks :) Miss Paterson <span style="color: #ff0037; display: block; font-family: 'Courier New',Courier,monospace;"> <span style="color: #ff0037; display: block; font-family: 'Courier New',Courier,monospace;">19/10/10 <span style="color: #ff0037; display: block; font-family: 'Courier New',Courier,monospace;">Nice story Zachary.....Caleb