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=10/10/10= = = = = =The Rainforest﻿ =

- Michael Dwyer
Dripping water off the leaves, Just what the rainforest needs, For all the plants and trees to grow, Thats one rule every gardener should know. A fresh green shoot pops out of the ground, While hangs an eerie silence not making a sound. Millions of other plants and schrubs have grew, Under the not always sky so blue. The first drop falls out of the cloud, To us quiet but to the rainforest loud.

12/10 Hey Michael I do enjoy your writing. this poem is very powerful. Miss Paterson

21/9/10

=Boy's song = =- Sam Hunt =

Above our house there is a track.

It winds it's way across the hills.

<span style="color: #000000; display: block; font-family: 'Arial Black',Gadget,sans-serif;">Hot afternoons the hills turn blue

<span style="color: #000000; display: block; font-family: 'Arial Black',Gadget,sans-serif;">And darker blue until they're black.

<span style="color: #0000ff; display: block; font-family: 'Arial Black',Gadget,sans-serif;">My father used to carry me

<span style="color: #0000ff; display: block; font-family: 'Arial Black',Gadget,sans-serif;">In a battered blue back- pack.

<span style="color: #0000ff; display: block; font-family: 'Arial Black',Gadget,sans-serif;">he used to take me high, high up

<span style="color: #0000ff; display: block; font-family: 'Arial Black',Gadget,sans-serif;">That winding high-hill track

<span style="display: block; font-family: 'Arial Black',Gadget,sans-serif;">When I got old enough to walk,

<span style="display: block; font-family: 'Arial Black',Gadget,sans-serif;">We walked together, my Dad and me.

<span style="display: block; font-family: 'Arial Black',Gadget,sans-serif;">when I got tired he gave me piggybacks.

<span style="display: block; font-family: 'Arial Black',Gadget,sans-serif;">I sometimes fell asleep like that.

<span style="color: #0000ff; display: block; font-family: 'Arial Black',Gadget,sans-serif;">Last week I watched my father walk

<span style="color: #0000ff; display: block; font-family: 'Arial Black',Gadget,sans-serif;">Away from me, up that same track.

<span style="color: #0000ff; display: block; font-family: 'Arial Black',Gadget,sans-serif;">The hills have turned from blue to black

<span style="color: #0000ff; display: block; font-family: 'Arial Black',Gadget,sans-serif;">So many times. Still he's not come back. 22/9/2010 This is WICKED! This poem is really cool but extremely sad.): Can't wait to see more (: __Mickey.__ I added this because I loved it. After the first time reading it I read about 3 more times because I liked it so much. this isn't the item im supposed to add this week because it's not mine but I just feel like sharing it with you guys. Michael.D

<span style="color: #ff0000; display: block; font-family: 'Palatino Linotype','Book Antiqua',Palatino,serif;">20/09 Thanks for sharing that Michael. I really enjoyed reading it and I can see why you like it so much. Miss Paterson

12/9/10 =<span style="background-color: #00ff15; color: #0000ff; display: block; font-family: 'Arial Black',Gadget,sans-serif;">Imaginary Friend =

<span style="background-color: #00ffff; color: #f33535; display: block; font-family: 'Arial Black',Gadget,sans-serif;">I have an imaginary mate, <span style="background-color: #00ffff; color: #f33535; display: block; font-family: 'Arial Black',Gadget,sans-serif;">Apparently his name is Hamish, <span style="background-color: #00ffff; color: #f33535; display: block; font-family: 'Arial Black',Gadget,sans-serif;">But it could be a girl called Kate. <span style="background-color: #00ffff; color: #f33535; display: block; font-family: 'Arial Black',Gadget,sans-serif;">Now I dont mind the name Hamish, <span style="background-color: #00ffff; color: #f33535; display: block; font-family: 'Arial Black',Gadget,sans-serif;">But for me it just doesn't do, <span style="background-color: #00ffff; color: #f33535; display: block; font-family: 'Arial Black',Gadget,sans-serif;">The name sounds a bit lamish, <span style="background-color: #00ffff; color: #f33535; display: block; font-family: 'Arial Black',Gadget,sans-serif;">But a good one is Caitilin Glue. <span style="background-color: #00ffff; color: #f33535; display: block; font-family: 'Arial Black',Gadget,sans-serif;">Today I can't make up my mind, <span style="background-color: #00ffff; color: #f33535; display: block; font-family: 'Arial Black',Gadget,sans-serif;">Of which my friend is called, <span style="background-color: #00ffff; color: #f33535; display: block; font-family: 'Arial Black',Gadget,sans-serif;">I'm tellng you She's very kind, <span style="background-color: #00ffff; color: #f33535; display: block; font-family: 'Arial Black',Gadget,sans-serif;">But mess with her and you'll get malled. <span style="background-color: #00ffff; color: #f33535; display: block; font-family: 'Arial Black',Gadget,sans-serif;">This name thing is startin' to bug me, <span style="background-color: #00ffff; color: #f33535; display: block; font-family: 'Arial Black',Gadget,sans-serif;">I think I might give up, <span style="background-color: #00ffff; color: #f33535; display: block; font-family: 'Arial Black',Gadget,sans-serif;">I'm startin' to feel quite cranky, <span style="background-color: #00ffff; color: #f33535; display: block; font-family: 'Arial Black',Gadget,sans-serif;">With names I have no luck.! Heyy i saw this one in your journal and I know Caitlin Glue but it is a really good poem!!!:) Eilish R

17/8/10 My super sweet poem!!!!! <span style="background-color: #19d709; color: #000080; display: block; font-family: Georgia,serif;">﻿M. <span style="background-color: #000080; color: #ff00ff; display: block; font-family: Arial,Helvetica,sans-serif;">﻿arvellous League player. <span style="background-color: #19d709; color: #000080; display: block; font-family: Georgia,serif;">I. <span style="background-color: #000080; color: #ff00ff; display: block; font-family: Georgia,serif;">﻿ntelligent. <span style="background-color: #19d709; color: #000080; display: block; font-family: Georgia,serif;">﻿c. <span style="background-color: #000080; color: #ff00ff; display: block; font-family: Georgia,serif;">ant stand Rugby. <span style="background-color: #19d709; color: #000080; display: block; font-family: Georgia,serif;"><span style="background-color: #000080; color: #ff00ff; font-family: Georgia,serif;">﻿ h. <span style="background-color: #000080; color: #ff00ff; display: block; font-family: Georgia,serif;">appy person. <span style="background-color: #19d709; color: #000080; display: block; font-family: Georgia,serif;">a. <span style="background-color: #000080; color: #ff00ff; display: block; font-family: Georgia,serif;">wesome. <span style="background-color: #19d709; color: #000080; display: block; font-family: Georgia,serif;">e. <span style="background-color: #000080; color: #ff00ff; display: block; font-family: Georgia,serif;">lement is one of my favourite brands. <span style="background-color: #19d709; color: #000080; display: block; font-family: Georgia,serif;">l. <span style="background-color: #000080; color: #ff00ff; display: block; font-family: Georgia,serif;">aughs at almost anything. <span style="background-color: #19d709; color: #000080; display: block; font-family: Georgia,serif;">D. <span style="background-color: #000080; color: #ff00ff; display: block; font-family: Georgia,serif;">rools at the sight of a quarter pounder. <span style="background-color: #19d709; color: #000080; display: block; font-family: Georgia,serif;">w. <span style="background-color: #000080; color: #ff00ff; display: block; font-family: Georgia,serif;">onders if his brother Tom is normal. <span style="background-color: #19d709; color: #000080; display: block; font-family: Georgia,serif;">y. <span style="background-color: #000080; color: #ff00ff; display: block; font-family: Georgia,serif;">es man is one of my favourite movies. <span style="background-color: #19d709; color: #000080; display: block; font-family: Georgia,serif;">e. <span style="background-color: #000080; color: #ff00ff; display: block; font-family: Georgia,serif;">lderly people somtimes get on my nerves. <span style="background-color: #19d709; color: #000080; display: block; font-family: Georgia,serif;">r. <span style="background-color: #000080; color: #ff00ff; display: block; font-family: Georgia,serif;">﻿andom. <span style="background-color: #00ff15; color: #000080; display: block; font-family: 'Courier New',Courier,monospace;">

<span style="color: #ff0006; display: block; font-family: 'Courier New',Courier,monospace;">I like this. In the future could you please date your work and put new work at the top of the page so that your reader sees your new work first and has to scroll down to see the old stuff. I'm impressed with the effort you are putting in :) Miss Paterson <span style="color: #ff0000; display: block; font-family: 'Arial Black',Gadget,sans-serif; font-size: 120%;">Awesome job I really enjoyed reading it

**<span style="color: #000000; display: block; font-family: 'Comic Sans MS',cursive;">Awesome Job .. *virtual-high5* From Tay(: ♥ **
10/8/10 ﻿lone wolf (continued)

Sorry I didn't add much this time I couldn't remember the rest of my story. I'll be working on another poem this week so I'll add that on here.
Hey Michael don't try and remember your other story. See what comes out of this one as you go. The idea isn't to make two stories the same but to be working on more than one bit of work. Also your font at the top is hard to read. Maybe you could change it? Miss Paterson

Aunt Selma :) Its awesome, good work. Tay
<span style="background-color: #000000; color: #ff0000; display: block; font-family: 'Comic Sans MS',cursive;">Great Job Michael. I can't wait to read more!!!!!!!! CARLA :

<span style="color: #000000; display: block; font-family: 'Comic Sans MS',cursive;">4/8/10 <span style="background-color: #00ff00; color: #ff0000; display: block; font-family: 'Arial Black',Gadget,sans-serif;">lone wolf (so far) <span style="background-color: #1bff00; color: #ff0000; display: block; font-family: Verdana,Geneva,sans-serif;">It started off as a normal summers day with Josh's friend Nathen at his house. Then suddenly the the phone rings and Josh's mum Kathleen answers. After a long talk Kathleen replied to whoever was on the line and said ,"OK.!," In a frustrated voice and with an angry face she slams the phone down on the charger. She looks her son Josh in the eye and says ,"Iv'e got some bad news wolf," Then she was rudely interupted by Josh ,"MUM!!! I hate it when you call me that," ,"Ok well anyway Josh I guess you will be staying at your Auntie Selma's place for a week. I've been called for a buisness trip," his mum replied. ,"Awww not Aunt Selma she's so old and she's no fun to be around,"

<span style="background-color: #ffffff; color: #ea3939; display: block; font-family: 'Trebuchet MS',Helvetica,sans-serif;">//Great to see you have made a start on your page. I'm looking forward to seeing where this story takes us :)//