Kyle

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20/09 Kyle please date your work!!! Miss Paterson

15/10
=troy= Kia Ora my names Troy and welcome to my interesting world. My three favourite things are Marshal Arts, Maths and Michael Jordan. I have three cousins. My dads not here at the moment, he's at the supermarket. But when he gets back is taking me to see Michael Jordan live. Thank you troy (do you need speech marks or other punctuation in here somewhere?) take a seat you dads not at the supermarket he is in the warehouse shout up Lenny how would you no. Ok kids what does this animal have moles no he does not have moles. Yea does cause ronney got them and it looks like him that looks like Lennys face when he thought it was halloween. Looks like your goat shut up .troy get out. =PART 2= Here comes mannay be cool tell her you are affraid of the dark no dont be an egg do some thing. Hay mannay wanna see some michael jordan basketball moves sure. Lay up/ no looker he did those moves in the final troys affraid of the dark. //18/10 Good start Kyle. Try to keep it original and add as many of your own ideas to this as you can. I can clearly see that you have been very motivated by 'Boy' but make it YOURS. I think you need to add punctuation to make it easy to follow. Miss Paterson.// = School hoildays poem, =

C ool
= My mate Hamish poem =

H ow bout that
= my mate Michael poem =

Earthquake
it was at 4.30am I just woke up from a loud shake I could __here__ my things from my shelf falling on ground I saw my mum standing at my door she said stay there. I did not __no__ what to do i thought i was dreaming but i was not .I was not in the mood for an earthquake i was super tried .It was not __to__ bad in Greymouth but over in christchurch it was mad streets were all cracked train tracks were all over the place the front of buildings had falling on the ground no deaths have been reported yet lucky. My Auntie gave as a call just after it happened all of things had been smashed she called not even get to my cousin his draw fall in front of the door.It is real lucky the roads were all __wright__ i was going to hamner springs.Lucky call it was on the 7,4 over in christchurch it was a pretty big one after all we were all safe.

20/09 I hope you will keep working on this piece of writing about the earthquake. I have underlined some words that you have written incorrectly. You have used the wrong (here, hear, hair, to, two, too, right, write, wright) I will let you think about which one you should have used. Also remember that when you use the pronoun 'I' it should ALWAYS be a capital. I am keen to see where this story goes. Miss Paters on

T ime to win
Under 12s West Coast league team are going to Wellington. We're going to Wellington to play against them. Gonna be FUN !!

Great to see you have made a start Kyle. It said that Tayla edited this page. Were you logged into Tayla when you did this? Miss Paterson :)

Good luck with league and I hope you win all of your games.I wish my parents let me play!!!Make sure you win a few games.Eilish R