Mollie

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﻿ Trying to remember someone you love is like trying to remember someone you never met ♥ - Unknown Float like a Butterfly sting like a Bee - Muhammad Ali ﻿﻿What would life be like if we had no courage to attempt Anything? - Vincent Van Gogh ﻿Never Regret Anying That Ever Made You Smile :) - Unknown Over and over I tried, and over and over you lied, and over and over I cried, and I don't know why. . . . . - unknown True Love never dies it only gets stronger with time ♥ - Unknown Its difficult to say what is inpossible for the dream of yesterday is the hope of today and the reality of tomorrow - Robert H Goddard

14/09/10 Acrostic Poem   M ollie is my name ♥   O ﻿ne of my favourite colours is green ♥ L ove my family ♥ L augh alot ♥ I like chocolate ♥ E ilish is one of my awesome friends ♥  YES can I get a whoop whoop!!!!ily moldog♥♥♥

Story

20/09 Hey Mollie, I'm hoping you will carry on with the story below because I'm interested to see where it is heading! Miss Paterson __17/08/10__ One day Emma decided to go to the park and fly her kite. Emma is a 6 year old girl. She likes going to the park to either play with friends or fly her kite. While Emma was on her way to the park she noticed something she hadn't seen before. It was a path. Emma went down the track wondering where it would take her. While Emma was walking she was amazed at what she saw. The path was colourful and had trees and flowers that she hadn't seen before.

__31/08/10__ As Emma was walking she started to think. She was thinking about what might be at the end of the path, if there was a end of the path and why hadn't she seen this path before? As Emma kept walking the wind picked up. She started to fly her kite when the wind got to strong and it blew the kite out of her hands. Emma __chased__ after her kite but couldn't get it. She stopped running so she could catch her __breathe__ and watched her kite fly away.

__11/09/10__ ﻿Emma was upset about her kite but she soon forgot about it she saw what was ahead of her. There stood A tall gate that towered above Emma she just had to know what was inside. . . . __13/09/10__  Emma went up to the gate, opened it and was amazed. Inside the gate was even better than outside. The Trees were bigger and brighter. The path was colourfuler ﻿ (<--is this a word??) and the flowers were __prettier.__ It had been half an hour and Emma had forgotten that she didn't know where she was. She kept walking though. As she was walking the path was getting duller, the sky was getting darker and there was getting less and less flowers. 22/09/10 ﻿ Then all of a sudden out leaped a monster!! She screamed then started to run but instead of going back where she knew there were no monsters she went foward not knowing what was ahead. . . How is it that it was fine before but not now? Emma wondered to herself. 03/10/10 As she kept going she started hearing __noises__, ﻿and she starting __seeing__ things. To make things worse it started to rain, She saw some trees and quickly ran to them. But what she din't see was that there were eyes in the trees. 18/08 Hey Mollie I have highlighted some words and phrases that you are repeating for you to think about synonyms (words that mean the same) for. When you repeat words and phrases your writing CAN SOMETIMES lose impact. In some types of writing the repeating of some words can be powerful. Usually in persuasive writing or poems. I'm not sure that it is working in this bit of writing. Don't worry about it now. Get your ideas down first but think about it when you come to proofing it. Miss Paterson :) 13/09 There stood a tall gate that towered above Emma she just had to know what was inside!!!! I leave the rest to you Mollie:) <span style="color: #ff0000; display: block; font-family: 'Palatino Linotype','Book Antiqua',Palatino,serif;">Eilish R:) <span style="color: #f202d6; display: block; font-family: 'Palatino Linotype','Book Antiqua',Palatino,serif;">Thanks Eilish I was completly blank =p

<span style="color: #870ef6; display: block; font-family: 'Comic Sans MS',cursive; text-align: center;">Mollies Poem <span style="color: #870ef6; display: block; font-family: 'Comic Sans MS',cursive; text-align: center;">The horse went mad, <span style="color: #870ef6; display: block; font-family: 'Comic Sans MS',cursive; text-align: center;">The rider got sad <span style="color: #870ef6; display: block; font-family: 'Comic Sans MS',cursive; text-align: center;">The horse was gray, <span style="color: #870ef6; display: block; font-family: 'Comic Sans MS',cursive; text-align: center;">And it was May <span style="color: #870ef6; display: block; font-family: 'Comic Sans MS',cursive; text-align: center;">Then the horse stopped being bad.

<span style="color: #ff002d; display: block; font-family: 'Palatino Linotype','Book Antiqua',Palatino,serif; text-align: left;">//It is good to see you have made a start on your page. I can't wait to see what else you are going to write on it! Miss Paterson :)//

<span style="background-color: #0a0a0a; color: #fe0b9a; display: block; font-family: 'Palatino Linotype','Book Antiqua',Palatino,serif; font-size: 110%; text-align: center;">Mollie's Limerick. There once was a man from Turkey, He ate alot of beef Jerkey. He came into town, Looking like a clown. **//But went home when the sky got murky.//**