Liam

21/09 Please date your work. I'm not sure which bit you are working on at the moment. Miss Paterson  I went too Christchurch on a Friday afternoon. know Joe wasn't really expecting me soon. So when I unpacked all of my things I went over to his house and made a ding-a-ling-a-ling. when I seen Joe he was waiting for me, he said we were having fish and chips for tea. There was an old cat that was fat who always loved to sleep on a mat then one day he sat on a rat which chased him with a basball bat until he went splat. 18/10, Liam Please date your work! If your poem above is meant to rhyme (which it does if I read it a certain way) then please organise it into lines so that the rhyming words are all at the end of the line. Miss Paterson

cool poem liam(:

that is very awesome liam i can see the rat with a baseball bat zac☺☺☺ RANDOM Everything = IS EVERYWHERE is up and down and all around sideways vertacal square and circle sphare and triangle oval and pentagon diamond and cilender silver and aqua golden and colbolt pink and violet teal and red bat fish and alagater mantaray and sordfish down from cat ray elephant dog hammerhead there all fishes TO BE CONTINUED .....!!!!!!!!!!????>.20\10\10 = = = 14/10/2010 = As the sun comes down in a big ball of yellow, as it shines across the water with clouds making the sun have different shapes, as the sky goes pink and peach, as it slowly goes down looking like a hut slowly disappearing into the sea, with not to much of the sun left, the clouds have a orange and pink glow, WOW! the green flash flashed across the horizon, like green flash lightening. I had an old cat called Clide, he mostly slept outside, when I cried he gave me cuddles,he tried avioeding puddles, that cat was balck and white, you seen that cat he was a beautiful sight, he had white fur color was ironic, now hes gone it hurts my stomach.I have two other cats 1st is charlie, he ran away thats quite narlie, next is pepper and he's still here, we dont want him to go away because he's quite dear, we also have other pets, my brothers going white baiting with a whitebait net. =